shortening founder paragraphs

2019-04-16 18:07:37 -07:00
parent 697c1cd81b
commit 199c675d5f
1 changed files with 8 additions and 12 deletions
@@ -478,7 +478,10 @@
 								<div class="testimonial-inner">
 									<div class="testimonial-main mb-32">
 										<div class="testimonial-body">
-											<p class="text-sm m-0">Having started a charity myself, I understand the challenges small organizations face when raising capital. I want charify to solve that gap and serve as an opportunity for charities to get a spotlight, scale, and maximize their potential impacts. Social entrepreneurs can change the world, and I hope charify can help make that happen.
+											<p class="text-sm m-0">Having started a charity myself, 
+												I understand the challenges small organizations face when raising capital.
+												 I want charify to solve that gap and serve as an opportunity for
+												  charities to get a spotlight, scale, and maximize their potential impact.
 											</p>
 										</div>
 									</div>
@@ -498,13 +501,10 @@
 									<div class="testimonial-main mb-32">
 										<div class="testimonial-body">
 											<p class="text-sm m-0">The feeling from giving on a consistent basis is
-												something I want everyone to experience. My family runs a small animal
-												shelter in
-												North India; I know that people will be more satisfied supporting
+												something I want everyone to experience. I know that people will be more satisfied supporting
 												unknown, but purposeful,
 												missions around
-												the world. I'm merely a visionary bringing that awareness into the
-												world.
+												the world.
 											</p>
 										</div>
 									</div>
@@ -526,13 +526,9 @@
 										<div class="testimonial-body">
 											<p class="text-sm m-0">Living in Brazil, I was fortunate enough to take
 												part in an initiative aiding foster kids in Sao Paulo.
-												During my time in the US, I created a connection
-												between my home America by starting my own fundraiser for
-												another Brazilian organization, this time dealing with
-												children's cancer support/research. Charify supports the
-												vision of a global donor network and enables the noblest
+												Charify supports my
+												vision of a global donor network and enables
 												patrons to make the highest impact with their contributions.
-
 											</p>
 										</div>
 									</div>