From 8055f1c720cef75d2aba130411245ad2c143f42d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Arjun Patel <patel.arjun50@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 5 Dec 2021 08:16:17 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] updated wording to make it flow a little better off tongue

---
 pages/index.js | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/pages/index.js b/pages/index.js
index e0c3e7d..6b638fd 100644
--- a/pages/index.js
+++ b/pages/index.js
@@ -28,9 +28,9 @@ export default function Home() {
 
             <p>🍃your minimalist social media</p>
 
-            <p>done with the rat race on <font color="grey">insta, tiktok, snap, &quot;meta&quot;...</font>?</p>
+            <p>tired of the rat race on <font color="grey">insta, tiktok, snap, &quot;meta&quot;...</font>?</p>
 
-            <p>start your detox to:
+            <p>start your detox with us and:
                 <br />
                 - live in the present
                 <br />
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ export default function Home() {
             <p>want an invite? text us @ <font color="grey">949.237.2715</font></p>
 
             <p id="side-note">
-                p.s. we don&apos;t sell your data, nor do we hire phd&apos;s to drug you...
+                p.s. we don&apos;t sell your data or hire phd&apos;s to drug you...
                 <br />
                 <Image src="/zuck.jpg" alt="mark zuckerberg" width={60} height={60} />
             </p>